Young Writers Society

Sapphire · Writer Joined: 23 May 2008 Posts: 99

Hiya! Thanks for reviewing my poem. I think I understand what you mean about the assignment thing - there are the same elements returned to in each stanza and maybe too much repetition of words and so on.

Thanks again!

Smile

Azila · Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2008 6:54 pm Title:

Congratulations on a beautiful piece of writing! "Questions" almost brought tears to my eyes. If you want me to check out anything else you've written give a shout!

~Azila~

EnchantressMuffin · Novelist Joined: 21 Apr 2007 Posts: 428

Thanks for your review of my poem. Smile

I'll try to apply the sounds, smells, tastes, because you're right, that's what makes a good poem even better. Now I'm just going to have to decide how to do that without draining what I already have. Very Happy

Peace, love, wharf rats.

Muffin

GingerLizzy · Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 5:19 pm Title:

Uhm... Thanks for reviewing my two pieces of poetry; "Playtime" and "Departed" and I hate to say I didn't truly find your advice all that helpful, but will look into what you are saying.

GingerLizzy · Posted: Sun Sep 02, 2007 10:17 pm Title:

I love you avatar ^^

[Signs in orange crayon]

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Poltergiest · Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 1:27 am Title:

Hobbes! *Hugs and runs away*

~Pol~

Esmé · Master of the Forum Joined: 27 Dec 2006 Posts: 1098

Good luck with Clearwater! Having said that, have a wonderfullz wonder day.

Elein

kitty15 · Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 5:36 pm Title:

Thanks for reviewing my poem =)

*Signs*

TL G-Wooster · Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 8:36 pm Title:

Hey Aussie! Thanks for signing my guestbook!

*signs Aussie's book in silver-white Tengwar Cursive*

-Shadow

gyrfalcon · Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 3:50 pm Title:

Hey there!!!! *hug* Just wanted to say congrats for making senior writer, darling! *sniff* I remember when you were just a novice.......