i am new to writing storys but i have been writing poems for a while. i love to write my poems because it is fun. i have won some contests with my poems and i am hopeing to put in some of my storys and hopefully place. but i'm not sure so i will put up some of my story's and u guys tell me wat u think of them... so i can get some advice on my writing... thanx :)
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JCobsesed Speaker of the Forum
Joined: 25 Jan 2007 Posts: 976 Country: In the depths of insomnia
Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 5:25 am Title:
Hey!
I'm JC! (obviously eh? lol)
I just wanted to say hi, I'm assuming you're at least semi-new-ish. Lol, but I haven't said hey yet, so...yeah.
If you ever want me to crit some fiction for you, go ahead and PM me, it's what I'm here for.
Also, I just read your story...depression something...I don't remember the title. And I just felt like saying it reminds me a lot of a book I'm writing now...Philosophy of the Dark...yeah...it's just cool. Great (or disturbed) minds think alike eh? lol.
Joined: 18 Sep 2006 Posts: 189 Country: United States
Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 11:35 pm Title:
Hey doll,
You need to be commenting on other people's work, you know? It's one of the rules. For every two comments you give you are able to submit one piece. Don't forget, okay?
Joined: 02 Nov 2005 Posts: 987 Country: Manchester, England
Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 11:20 pm Title:
Dearie, I give the same style of advice to everyone don't take it as either compliment or insult, it's just the way I roll - put your feelings aside, you can trust me as a critiquer to be entirely honest and non-judgemental. The only thing I want to see is you improving - don't worry about how fast that happens or how good you are right at the moment, I'll just give you the information, and you can choose how you use it.
And I just felt like saying it reminds me a lot of a book I'm writing now...Philosophy of the Dark...yeah...it's just cool. Great (or disturbed) minds think alike eh? lol.
don't take it as either compliment or insult, it's just the way I roll - put your feelings aside, you can trust me as a critiquer to be entirely honest and non-judgemental. The only thing I want to see is you improving - don't worry about how fast that happens or how good you are right at the moment, I'll just give you the information, and you can choose how you use it.