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    Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 5:59 pm    Title: Reply with quote

    Everytime I try and crit it, something happens so I loose it. *searches for a shoulder to weep upon* First it was the wrong key, then it was a bad computer... *sniffles*

    See? Jinx.
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    Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 5:19 pm    Title: Reply with quote

    There is *bleep* jinx on *bleep* Gypsie *bleep* Eyes.
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    Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 5:59 pm    Title: Reply with quote

    http://www.katfeete.net/writing/agent.html

    I don't know, have you got an agent and all yet? Anyway, just thought you might be able to use that, if you haven't found it already.
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    Posted: Wed Jun 18, 2008 5:56 pm    Title: Reply with quote

    Hi! I really liked Gypsie eyes. POST MORE OR YOU WILL DIE!!!111one
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    Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 9:16 am    Title: Reply with quote

    I say, if Penny Sapphires is published, shouldn't you take it down? Copyright and all.

    Disneyland good? Did you go on the POTC ride? (That's like the only thing I know that's at Disneyland, aside from people dressed up like Mickey Mouse.)
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    Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 11:04 pm    Title: Reply with quote

    Danteel wrote:
    “What she just lets him lead her on a leash! Like some kind of animal!? Were that me, he’d have to drag every single step of the way.”


    Danny-boy, where does that kind of thinking get you? Nowhere, except where it's sore and hungry. Anyway, Quennel could be worse.





    Yes, she did just say that. Rolling Eyes

    How was your holiday? No matter about Scavenger, I only today got around to In Thrall, and I couldn't believe how much I'd missed. Now that I've finished Gypsie Eyes (I still reread the draft we printed off, have you edited it much since then?) In Thrall's become my point of interest.


    *puts an egg down on the floor*

    *pause*

    *egg hatches into an ostrich which quickly runs away*

    Hey, come back!

    *runs after the ostrich while the screen shrinks like a Roadrunner cartoon*
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    Posted: Sat May 31, 2008 5:01 pm    Title: Reply with quote

    Bird, you were Random Member.


    "Be happy in your work." -- Colonel Saito, Bridge on the River Kwai
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    Posted: Tue May 27, 2008 6:05 pm    Title: Reply with quote

    Aww. Well, making you smile makes my day. Consider us even.

    ^_^
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    Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 5:07 pm    Title: Reply with quote

    *hugs*

    Because I can. =P

    Hoping all is well as could be with you, Crazy Bird!
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    Posted: Sat May 03, 2008 9:11 pm    Title: Reply with quote

    Thanks for the Fool crit! I can't imagine how I had so many typos. >.<

    And yes, it was a deliberate quote. Fal's obsessed with our popular culture. Wink
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