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breaking the fourth wall | worldbuilding, plot, characters, word count and more. Short Premise: Two characters have been placed into a timeloop and are the only ones who realize. After ...

Hi! Dragon back for another review! This one looks like it's going to be a doozy. That upon which my dragon's eye fixed When she saw an ominous white ring, ...

I had a random burst of inspiration the other day.

Bella and the black box what can i say.

Wow, I gotta say, this story was a wild ride from start to finish! Let me break it down for you. First off, that prologue had me hooked right away. ...

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the spooky S’more? Top Graham Cracker - The merfolk waited for Taurael to come back ...

Hi herbalhour! Not sure how such a cool poem is still around in the Green Room :0 but I'm glad I bumped into it! I agree with Ellie below on ...

➥First impressions💗: Short and sweet. It was an adorable read that sets a cosy scene, loved the interactions between the characters felt like a genuine brother and sister moment. A ...

Hello, I'm here to leave a review. First of all, thanks for sharing this poem. It's evident that the expressions come from a heart that is lonely and longing for ...

I come across this type of stuff sometimes, and I do tend to wonder just how I should respond. Lots of times people will post something like poetry where it's ...

I have pondered on this question for a long time now...

Hello, I am AkuRashomon and I am here to give you a review/comment for your first short story posted on YWS. Also, welcome to YWS! If you need help, you ...

Maybe One Day We'll Meet Today's Inspiration: Today is Free Choice Friday! Where Ley, Kate, and I got to pick the song and where to take inspiration! So today, I ...

Sitting on the mat of the gym, Alistair fell on his back, letting the sweat on his shirt slick up against the cool mat. He had been going through his ...

Hi! Dragon back again for another review of this amazing story. That upon which my dragon's eye fixed "Maybe ask someone else," said Stud. "Even though Ginger and Splashy seem ...

This is Simon. Simon is looking for a job. ​"HEl-" It's rude to interrupt the Narrator. "PLEASE, HE'S A PSYCHO, HE-" I said...It's RUDE. *Static*