Young Writers Society

This Poem is absolutely amazing! and the imagrey of "I pray for my skull to give way at the soft parts, implode at the seams"...YIKES! The visually image of the ...

XD that'll be fun You're all good! just wanted to make sure there wasn't anything else you wanted to add in! It'll be up soon!

I Love the line "This mask, a beaming, welcoming grin" really emphasizes that underneath the mask is anything but. This work really delves into thoughts and emotions of someone who ...

When you are forced to hide what you really feel...

Hello, my fellow writing friend! A Little Skimming - First Impressions I just want to say it now, I didn't read the previous chapters of this, so I am not ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Josephine had never seen someone more handsome than the specimen standing in front of them. His eyes were a cloudy gray, and his stark-black hair ...

Hello, my fellow writing friend! A Little Skimming - First Impressions Wow! This was a truly deep and poetic piece. Even the title could be a poem of it's own! ...

Aloha ToastK! Rose here with a review for this interesting story :] I. First Things First First and foremost, let’s talk about the awesome stuff. :D I've read the first ...

Day 21 Napo. I didn't expect any of them to be good, but here we go

Sovereign Written by @JazzElectrobass and @Spearmint Peasants. Measley peasants. Do they not think she'd been ruling fairly? Were people that senseless that they were so ungrateful? It was utterly rid

B392 does something absolutely and utterly disgusting, Sage brings a new member to the crew. When will Alice ever come home?

This chapter was heck to write, but I'm relatively content with how it's turned out.

When you can't reach the train handles and a convenient arm is right there...

Nice work done by the author (as always). All your poems are just amazing. This whole poem would sound so cool as a rap. "The clowns are doing their job ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary This is probably one of my favorite chapters so far! It had me hooked from beginning to end! From the anticipation up to the fight ...

A few things: first is formatting feedback. I'd take out the 'chapter x's because the story flows much better without the addition of the titles and honestly, in my experience, ...