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Hello! Thanks for sharing this work. The sentiment it expresses is lovely. I really like the concept of being the music that reaches a person's heart. I feel like this ...

Okay, I'll be reviewing as I read along I don't particularly get along with god either. actually, I hate religion. it makes my skin crawl. not only that, but I ...

Hello There! ~ Writing Commentary All the buildings were either demolished or badly destroyed, shattered shards of glass and broken off pieces of concrete were everywhere. The air was colder ...

Hey, aren't you the one who wrote a speech about people commiting suicide? I have yet to read it; I'll review as I read a long. But I hope things ...

Hello Stranger! ~ Writing Commentary Hello there! I am happy that you liked my previous comment! I would like to give a formal review of your story with my own ...

Awe, thank you Orabella :D You are so kind!!!!

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the review? Top Graham Cracker - William has gotten more power by controlling Taurael without ...

i remembered i had an account here recently so i logged back on - half wish i didn't because i posted the weirdest stuff back in 2016-17. i still kind ...

Taurael enters the dream and something strange occurs.

Hi names 22Midnight hope your doing well, let's get into it! First Impression: I like the title for this, looking forward to seeing what that might mean, from my guesses ...

Hi, ariah!! I am totally late to this but- wait- :o Is this a remake of Reflecting Hearts?!! Woahh, I remember reading the first draft that you posted on here ...

I woke up, hazy and confused with my strength drained. Everything was unfamiliar, unknown, and… chthonic; infernal and dreadful.

Hi, Toast here! I’d like to first say, Wow! this was such a great read! First, the concept was super interesting! The idea of what lies in the afterlife has ...

The children who died are ghosts. They wander what used to be the school. One of them ate fruit which turned him from human to dragon. Now claws replaced his ...

I'm still working on my reviewing format but I hope you enjoy! That upon which my dragon's eye fixed I really love the setting you set up and the tinge ...

Hey y'all, I'm rusty at reviews. Take with a grain of salt. The motif of the seasons is well-used, but not unwelcome-- it's easy to connect to, as everyone experiences ...