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Nice poem written by the author. The title is quite interesting and unique, because of which I read rest of the poem. "Love is a Monster Love will make you ...

The story was alright. I really liked the way you stressed about snow:). I liked that you tried to give a description, but it needs a little work. And also ...

So, the old-fashioneds were in fact serving them now. Something in the way Alan determinedly guzzled his drink told Lyall that this upcoming conversation was going to be, simply put, ...

Wow, that was something very unexpected from what I imagined. It totally kept you waiting for every next word. I like the way you put a really nice way of ...

#4 Love Poetic Style - 5 - Visual/Found Inspiration - 3 - Song Theme Coin Flip - N/A - N/A Lyric Choice: N/A

Hi! Dragon here for one last review for a while. Love the story so far, and I know it's only getting better from here! That upon which my dragon's eye ...

Good Luck out There Today's Inspiration: Today’s song was wish you well by Wrabel. I rolled Freestyle and Dealer’s Choice, so I focused on letting go of heartbreak and wishing ...

Hi Damian, welcome to YWS - hope you are enjoying the site so far! Here to review your story! Dialect I think the last time I read story with this ...

i wish you well Song: wish you well - Wrabel I rolled a 1 (freeverse) and a 4 (dealers choice: song title inspiration) wishingwell.jpg you grinded my bones into thin ...

Hello Hello, I hope you dont mind me popping in with a quick review. Props to both of you for creating a very honest and reflective piece. By the way, ...

Hello my fellow writer! Let's get started. Okay. So first off, I wanted to state how really impressively written this was! The metaphor of loneliness... very well done! You make ...

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Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : Well this was a rather adorable little tale ...

Someone finds themself floating in nothingness, and reminisce about a kind of loneliness.

for reference see: bigger than the whole sky

Hi! Dragon back for another review! This one looks like it's going to be a doozy. That upon which my dragon's eye fixed When she saw an ominous white ring, ...