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I live all around you. I live in your shadows. I live under you bed, and in your closet. I feed off your nightmares. I???m the one you fear. I???m ...

Hopefully this is a good way to start a book!

1. My left toe is cold upon the breath of salt water, it folds over grey concrete and recedes back, again. Frilly white edges crooning the lonely sea ...

Because I like action so much, I tried to make these fights scenes as realistic and detailed as possible. Criticism would be amazing, and reviews and all that. ???Scary??? didn???t ...

Chapter 8, things are getting interesting. I hope you enjoy reading this chapter, I enjoyed writing it. Review this and I will love you <3 Nightmares had constantly clawed at ...

Stheno had yanked Jimmy and Selina away, shoving them and threatening them as she led them through ghostly halls. The castle was huge on the outside but it seemed it ...

This is probably the most interesting chapter so far. Reviews would be great! After about an hour of crazy fast driving, the car slowed down, gravel was flung from the ...

Please review! Enjoy. She was obviously moving, due to the gentle hum of the motor, and the occasional bumps that thrashed her up and down, plus the general motion of ...

Things get more interesting here, this is when the action really starts to happen. I'd love to hear what you think of this chapter. ???Good evening Moina, we have guests,??? ...

I'm thinking this chapter is less boring then the two before it, but then again, I'm the writer and you're the reader. Criticize away! : ) After a while Selina ...

This is chapter 2, probably not any better then chapter one, I wrote it a while ago and have read and studied a lot of books since. Tell me what ...

???I thought that a prologue would be an excellent way to grab the reader's attention and keep them reading. Criticism would be really helpful as I want to improve my ...

I am concerned that the beginning of this chapter is too boring, reviews would be highly appreciated. Otherwise please enjoy this piece of work from the book I am currently ...

I couldn’t do it. I couldn’t leave him up there all alone! I couldn’t leave the two men I loved most up there to what could possibly be their death! ...

“So, how are things going for you and Yasir?” I asked Callie at work one day. I worked at a small but very good coffee shop named The Espresso Room. ...