Young Writers Society

My second review. I'm trying to write one a day so that can familiarize myself with other people's work as well as see what things I may have to change ...

Alright, your entry both has a lot of good, and some bad. First, the good: 1. The allusions flow naturally. 2. You characterize Adam and James well. I'm left with ...

Hello AraWolf! Let's get into it! Ooh... This is such an interesting story! I love how you build suspense. It has a very well constructed storyline (at least, as much ...

Hello, Ley! I'm finally getting into the chapters still left in the green room, and I hope to get to the rest of those chapters soon! April is almost over, ...

Salutations, curious mind! Amaya here, ready to dive into the pages of this intriguing story. 📚! Here’s the first review! Buckle up, 'cause we're diving into my review magic! ✨ ...

Hello Again, My Friend! It's me, Raven, and I'd like to review the next chapter in this great story using my Familiar method! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh ...

Hello! :D This is a great little poem.The descriptions are beautifully written. (They are very vivid, and it's easy to relate to the speaker.) The only mistake (or at least ...

This is an amazing poem. I had a really bad day today because of someone and this poem is quite suitable for the situation. "We could have had it all, ...

Wow, this is an amazing chapter written by the author. I really like the author's way of describing the characters in the story. "The dark woman withdrew a sword while ...

Please note this was written with voice to text. If I have any errors please tell me. When I smiled: I knew that was coming. She loves the demons and ...

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the review? Top Graham Cracker - William and Taurael enter the Sylvian dream, so that ...

So I read this and started the review like a month ago but I'm a terrible person so here we are. THE FACT THAT WE HAVE LEFT MIREYA AND HER ...

Hi there, vampricone! It's been a while, so I'm popping by for a quick review today! Let's just jump right in shall we? Melanie woke up in a white room, ...

Hi names 22Midnight hope your doing well, let's get into it! First Impression: I'm thinking just from reading the title that this might be about if someone has enough money ...

This is my first review as well as first story that I've read on this site. I'm new here, lol. So, I apologize if my review is a bit dry ...